| Pool - 07.02.03 |
| submitter: | Ken |
| location: | Houston, TX |
haiku:
kids who dream of pools
often cry at summers end
chlorine bleached and tan |
| category: | Seen Worse |
| comments: | 2 |
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| wim commented on 11.03.08 | | if ine is one syllabe it is a good formed haiku , but I would have made another third line |
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| ChristineL commented on 07.04.03 | | Here's one for ya:
Children running free.
Fast car plows into the game.
Their things in a heap. |
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